Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 421,198 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Worst Sufferer - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I am perturbed
And disturbed
When find no response
For number of poems

Rest everywhere
They care
Show the gesture
And make sure

It provides encouragement
And boost for the poet
But if selective bias comes in force
Then your dries up your inner source

You feel let down
And only anxiety remains known
How many poets find response to their creation?
No suitable answer shall be found for the question

I give best input
To all those who
Put in their best
For the reader’s test

One must stop writing
And stop igniting
Passion for self and others
Ultimately you remain worst sufferer

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2015 6:15:00 PM)


    welcome Lola del Rosario, Nikhat Bano, Sheila Logan
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2015 5:46:00 PM)


    this is perfection in the hand of a true poet. tfs
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2015 8:42:00 AM)


    welcome Henry Okehie and Monika Hilal Gül Toth like this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2015 8:33:00 AM)


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    Satyananda Sarangi Agree sir! !
    Not a word, and a mention so rare,
    with his quest, he keeps on,
    and not a day, not a night with care,
    suffering as the destiny's son.

    Years elapse, and generations pass,
    his thought recovered from a torn diary page,
    to garner accolades, he is no more,
    having gripped by death before an age...
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2015 7:18:00 AM)


    Ashraf Hossain very good
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2015 7:18:00 AM)


    this is perfection in the hand of a true poet. tfs
    12 minutes ago by chris dries
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2015 6:59:00 AM)


    One must stop writing
    And stop igniting
    Passion for self and others
    Ultimately you remain worst sufferer
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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 18, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, September 18, 2015


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