Tuesday, March 22, 2016

'' Would You Not Do The Same '' Comments

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Our planet's a bubble,
Filled with rubble,
It's a constant fight to escape,
Every day brings even more trouble,
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Paul Sebastian 22 March 2016

Life is full of challenges. You have put that clearly in this poem. Living must be meaningful or there is no meaning. You expressed it well here. Life can be gloomy or sunny and the choice can be one that is positive.

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