Wrapped Comments

it's a welcoming poem. I realise that many poets on this website write in this style- where prose is fused into poems. Although I do not disapprove of it, I dun quite like it much either, thus, I meanly evade from commenting on these. However, I felt that your this poem was not too bad, truthfully. It has concept and nice phrases all around. I give nice poems their due comments, so here it is! I very much liked the way you ended off the poem: 'Just another one of us. ' It is a true poem phrase and a simple yet probing one which is masterly. Perhaps you could too write it in this matter, with a starting that goes like: 'Wrapped in your religion; Protected by your faith. Is its powers of salvation For whom; but from you save? ' Explore in this boundless world of poetry, the different styles, imagery and more, and I hope you enjoy every step of it!