Wrecked Comments

I tripped trying to find your hand in the dark. Wow. Just one of many wonderful lines in this great poem! This is going to be one of those poems which stick in my mind for days to come. You write from your heart, soul and emotions which helps your poetry to come across as so beautifully honest. Saving this one to my list of favorites!

'Trying to find your hand In the dark and I fell. I fell. I twisted, I choked, I cried, and I hoped for you To be there to catch me, But I fell. I shattered When I hit the bottom. You wrecked me.' - Life will not stop here. Just get up and carry on, some one will be there with outstretched hands!

This one is so emotional. My heart sank reading it. Beautiful.

I hope for you, go on.. please read my poems if you so like.