Sunday, October 28, 2007

Write Me A Metaphor Comments

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These words are just pressed thoughts
upon a page, fragile like crumbling leaves,
golden on the ground and vulnerable;
stepped on so easily and disregarded,
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Laala Kashef Alghata
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Phoenix Rory 31 October 2007

I really enjoyed reading this. I agree. Writing is like breathing, life is nothing without it.

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Ted Sheridan 28 October 2007

This is a very mature poem for someone so young. I enjoyed it.

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