Vivek Tiwari

Rookie - 113 Points (23 July 1985 / Gaura (R.S.) Pratapgarh)

Wrong Verification! - Poem by Vivek Tiwari

Trouble and trouble and trouble all times
Whenever I try to appreciate the lines-

Lines from my friends' creations
To add my feelings of appreciation.

They don't let me add my praises
When I wanna enjoy their pages.

Nor they let me value their creation
Comes interruption of 'Wrong Verification'

While I know I'm right
As I'm guided by sense and sight.

Yet it says try again
Repeated efforts are all in vain.

Disturbs even Hata 500 a bit
Again problem in clicking to submit.

My heart yet thanks you share your lines
And let me enjoy your rhythm and rhymes.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem I've written after facing the immense problem in running the sight and viewing and visiting my poet friends.
Either its the matter of making comments or giving the votes comes the problem of wrong verification and problems in clicking to submit.
I'm really troubled of it.
How long will it last I don't know.

Comments about Wrong Verification! by Vivek Tiwari

  • Valsa George (2/3/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    This is what everyone feels! Unless we have great patience and tolerance, we will be forced to drop half the way with the regret lingering that we have failed in communicating our appreciation for our poet friends! ! Well put Vivek! (Report) Reply

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  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (1/28/2013 6:01:00 AM)

    a very suitable and beautiful criticism of the issue. I too felt it many times.Still it continues.You responded.Congratulations (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, January 25, 2013

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