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Journey Of Stones

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'Let`s start our journey of fate`,
Proposed a stone to his mate,
`We shall have a race to run
High or low, rough or plain,
Let us see how fate is cast;
For,
Nothing to gain hanging this cliff
So high on top, so crag and vast.`

Both the stones agreeing thus parted

With a splash! They darted
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Shraddha Tiwari 27 February 2014

This poem has a good lesson that recites the thought where is the will there is the way. The use of Hindi words enhances the poem`s sense of sublimity. The two stones teach all of us a good lesson of life. The last stanza is superb in its philosophy.

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Tanya Gupta 27 February 2014

very nice poem with right slection of rhythems truely impressed...please come to my page, i need your comments

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Shraddha The Poetess 27 February 2014

wonderful poem, written in a bautiful nd ineresting pattern........... with awessomme rhyming scheme......well done bhaiya... surely 10 on 10.........

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Shraddha The Poetess 27 February 2014

a wonderful poem...........written in an interesting pattern with awssomme rhyyyyminggg scheme............ hatsssss offffff.............. well done bhaiya sam surely 10 on 10.......

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Anoushka Sinha 27 February 2014

wow... truly breathtaking, i myself lived in kashi for a long time and loved your way of describing the temple the images all came back to me.. =) well done! !

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Sujeet Kumar Vishwakarma 04 January 2016

Nice poem. :) sure an inspirer.

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V P Mahur 28 February 2014

lovely poem Tiwari ji It has a message and encouragement. read my poems if you find time and tell me something about them. Thanks

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Msforever Lonley 28 February 2014

it was long but it was very good. keep up the good work. really inspirational! ! ! xc excellent

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Indranil Bhaduri 28 February 2014

Lovely poem///Interesting write.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 28 February 2014

nice poem, very thought-provoking.

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