Wrung Out And Perplexed Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Wrung Out And Perplexed

Rating: 5.0


I want to dive in this
river, wash this drink
from my hands, shake the
hands of our maker, then
settle in this chair,
I want to watch a movie,
I want to learn to dance,
I want to play forever, in
my lovers hands.

Wednesday, January 4, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: river
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Root 06 August 2006

HI David beautiful and loving poem, again you are very unique and creative writer. I enjoy reading your poetry. You are an usual writer but I have learned to love your creativity. Take care.

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***** ********* 05 January 2006

Can't think of a better way of making out David! I really liked the feel of this little poem. 10 from Smiling at you Tai

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Jeffrey Spahr-Summers 04 January 2006

I like this very much David. Thanks!

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David Gerardino 04 January 2006

there are times when i write, and rewrite..........................this is one of them,

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