Wrung Out And Perplexed Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Wrung Out And Perplexed

Rating: 5.0


I want to dive in this
river, wash this drink
from my hands, shake the
hands of our maker, then
settle in this chair,
I want to watch a movie,
I want to learn to dance,
I want to play forever, in
my lovers hands.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Root 06 August 2006

HI David beautiful and loving poem, again you are very unique and creative writer. I enjoy reading your poetry. You are an usual writer but I have learned to love your creativity. Take care.

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***** ********* 05 January 2006

Can't think of a better way of making out David! I really liked the feel of this little poem. 10 from Smiling at you Tai

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Jeffrey Spahr-Summers 04 January 2006

I like this very much David. Thanks!

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David Gerardino 04 January 2006

there are times when i write, and rewrite..........................this is one of them,

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