Saturday, May 18, 2013

Ww1 Fight For Country, Fight For Queen Comments

Rating: 4.8

They went to war in their teams
full of hope and dreams
ready to fight and do it right
fight for country, fight for queen
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melissa highland
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Christian Brown 14 July 2013

Astounding ha I guess I use that word a lot but I just love poems that flow, that is amazing poem because the words weren't forced into rhyming they went together and you use great metaphor when you compare the blood to the poppies. Talent...absolute talent.

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Excellent poem Melissa, very nice first poem and quiet vivid too.

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Gajanan Mishra 18 May 2013

ready to fight and do it right, beautiful one, go on. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 May 2013

nice poem well composed lovely one... welcome to this PH

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