They went to war in their teams
full of hope and dreams
ready to fight and do it right
fight for country, fight for queen
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Excellent poem Melissa, very nice first poem and quiet vivid too.
ready to fight and do it right, beautiful one, go on. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
Astounding ha I guess I use that word a lot but I just love poems that flow, that is amazing poem because the words weren't forced into rhyming they went together and you use great metaphor when you compare the blood to the poppies. Talent...absolute talent.