XiǍ O Húdié...XiǍ O GŪ AigŪ Ai (Little Butterfly...Little Sweetie) Comments

I read another poem, childlike in its simplicity, earlier that didn't work for me. In many ways, this poem is similar, but it works and it works well. I'm so glad I got to read this.

Gurgle...is...the most beautiful...gurgle gurgle poem.

Lovely little poem and such sweet imagery. Love the fact that it is from the baby's point of view and who knows...maybe this is how she experiences our world that is now hers. love Debbie Debs