Friday, February 12, 2016

Y// The Invisible Thread Comments

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Between the walls of our chest,
inside our heart, swimming freely,
there is a strong thread of kindness
playing, enjoying itself invisibly.
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Aufie Zophy
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Al Amine 30 April 2019

let us all activate this thread and change the world

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Valsa George 13 February 2016

This invisible thread is perhaps a spark of divinity that makes us humane, loving and compassionate without which we would have been just beasts, acting on impulse! It is of course a beautiful gift bestowed by God to humans! Empathy springs from this invisible thread. You have expressed this beautifully and logically in your poem!

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