Yelling At Me Poem by taylor marie

Yelling At Me

Rating: 5.0


regreting this
this unwanted lover
this life
regreting not atempting suicide
the veins are screaming
screaming let the blood fall! ! ! ! ! ! !
my hearts screaming
screaming fix me! ! fix me now! ! ! ! !
my brains screaming
screaming what the fk u doing!
my legs screaming
screaming please stop hurting me
regreting all the pain
the past
and regreting being alive
wanting to slice and dice my veins in two
in two so they could stop yelling!
stop yelling at me!
i didnt do sh-it to u
all i did was want to die..........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Schmidt 11 October 2009

I think you may have trouble with this one as the agreement doesn't allow some of the word choices you use. This poem is very violent, and I know it talks of great pain, I challenge you to do it with irony and less poisonous words :) ~Christine

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