This is dedicated for you sweetie
My life been a rough ride full of cracks and storms
so perilous to withstand firm by my own
all my hope been gone like sand washed away from shore
ive knelt, begging for mercy from God alone
Just all my hope are gone, your light touch me up
giving all that I didnt and what I may have
you fight with your sword of tongue i'd learn to clap
a pillar of strong love, shield of gold to dive
A sweet cherry, a sound of perfect harmony
warmth covering me when im cold in snow
a garden to behold, a watchful scenery
a stunning smell that the most comforting wind blow
Your the first attraction I set upon my eyes
the last feeling of ease, a feeling to be please
sweetie, be her to guide me, love pie, protect me
thank you for doing such, for doing what youve done
god give me you is what I can have in my mind
she will be very happy when she reads this poem she is one lucky 'you'
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi, a poem full of imagery about life struggles but with all those struggles, someone gives light in that lonely journey. Well written...only that don't forget to use formal mechanics in writing like 'I' instead of 'i' and ' I've' instead of 'i'd'. Well, for the first time, I rated you 10.Congrats.