Saturday, October 15, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

This is dedicated for you sweetie

My life been a rough ride full of cracks and storms
so perilous to withstand firm by my own
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eddine roy gomez
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Susan Aparejo 19 October 2011

Hi, a poem full of imagery about life struggles but with all those struggles, someone gives light in that lonely journey. Well written...only that don't forget to use formal mechanics in writing like 'I' instead of 'i' and ' I've' instead of 'i'd'. Well, for the first time, I rated you 10.Congrats.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 15 October 2011

she will be very happy when she reads this poem she is one lucky 'you'

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eddine roy gomez

eddine roy gomez

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