This is dedicated for you sweetie
My life been a rough ride full of cracks and storms
so perilous to withstand firm by my own
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she will be very happy when she reads this poem she is one lucky 'you'
Hi, a poem full of imagery about life struggles but with all those struggles, someone gives light in that lonely journey. Well written...only that don't forget to use formal mechanics in writing like 'I' instead of 'i' and ' I've' instead of 'i'd'. Well, for the first time, I rated you 10.Congrats.