You Poem by Ben Smith

You

Rating: 4.0


In my head
Can't stop remembering
Your face, your
Hair, your touch
Loving your smile
Loving you always

Can't say good
Bye, but I
Must put away
This industrial lust

Your boyfriend, my
best friend, no
Mistakes
Regrets

Friday, August 31, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: boyfriend,lust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samantha Gibson 21 March 2008

beautifully sad. reminds me of my experiences with love

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Vindy Wasana 29 February 2008

Deep idea expressed in simple way. well done.`

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Ameera Aidrus 29 February 2008

Gud write....u seem to b a romatic fool! lolz

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 09 September 2007

i really liked the flow of this. good topic too.

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Evaughn Gray 31 August 2007

nice poem..really liked it..~hazel

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Ben Smith

Ben Smith

Traverse City, Michigan
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