Thursday, May 11, 2006

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You're my something in the way,
You're the darkness in my heart,
You're the voices in my head,
You're my anti-muse.
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Mordrid Harpoon
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Melissa Patty 15 July 2015

This poem I feel has loafs of emotion. People in this world can either be a blessing to you or they can be a curse. Don't let them get you down, they are not worth your fight. Make the right decisions for you. Very well writen poem, Stay Strong xx

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Melissa Patty 16 July 2015

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***** ********* 11 May 2006

An oh dear poem Mordrid! Appropriate name too it seems. The thing is, we control our own lives in truth and if someone is not appropriate to your needs, they will go from your life. You just got to be sure you want them to. A very expressive and well written poem. From all of us, welcome to Poemhunter, the best poetry site in the world. 10 with a smile from Tai

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