You And I In The Furnace Poem by viplob pratik

You And I In The Furnace

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Just as the fire rages in the furnace
when the wind rushes through the stoker

you are blowing your breath all over
the coals of my anxieties

and the embers of my disorders are alight.

As the hammer
dipping into water, heating up in flames
beats molten iron
you beat my mind and emotions

the reach of my sorrow expands.

At times I feel: how marvelous is your handiwork
What sort of skill is this? Amazing—
What are you trying to make?

You are so lost in your effort
I am afraid to ask about your creation
lest I should hinder you.

Yet—should I stay quiet, asking nothing, I worry
some fearsome creation might take place
Tell me
how long you will keep stoking this fire?
How long will you beat my mind and emotions?

Could it be that you have mistaken me for metal?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
originally written in Nepali and translated by Manjushree Thapa
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subroto Bhoumik 29 July 2018

Wonderful, especially the last line. Keep flowing dear.

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Viplob Pratik 15 April 2020

thank you so much! you are kind to me. love!

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Viplob. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Gajanan Mishra 21 May 2013

lost in effort, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Viplob Pratik 11 August 2015

i will do it happily. :)

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