Tuesday, May 21, 2013

You And I In The Furnace Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just as the fire rages in the furnace
when the wind rushes through the stoker

you are blowing your breath all over
the coals of my anxieties
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Subroto Bhoumik 29 July 2018

Wonderful, especially the last line. Keep flowing dear.

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Viplob Pratik 15 April 2020

thank you so much! you are kind to me. love!

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Viplob. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Gajanan Mishra 21 May 2013

lost in effort, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Viplob Pratik 11 August 2015

i will do it happily. :)

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