You And The Eclipse Poem by Kay Barcelon

You And The Eclipse

Rating: 5.0


The eclipse at twilight
It reminded me of us
The moon disappearing at night
Almost like the love that was

Our memory together is fading away
A feeling is not even in existence
I could hardly recall a time or place
Just a confused vision of the past

As I looked upon the darkness
It is like a flashback of our love
Nothingness is coming to mind
And your image seems out of place

The stars are twinkling so feebly
Around the nearly invisible moon
Like flashes of meaningless memory
In my head emerging a blank hole

Sounds coming from a distance
Howling sounds of the our past
A faint series of words and cries
Only now all fading with the moon

Trees were dancing with the wind
I can hear my new love whispering
A nice warm feeling all around me
And almost nothing of you in my head





28 aug 07 @ 5: 41 am cdt

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Kay Barcelon

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Manila Philippines
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