poet Kay Barcelon

Kay Barcelon

. Because Now There Is No 'Us'

Why do we hurt each other
Is it love or is it hate
Is it because we are far away
Or is it because we know
There is no tomorrow

Did we forget once we have loved
Did we lost the feeling of passion
Have we replaced it with sorrows
Why the insensible struggling
Are we mourning for the lost love

Why are we fighting
Why are we hurting
Why are we in agony
Why do we even talk
Why can’t we go back

Remember the days
We laughed and we danced
Remember the feeling
There was no one else but us
Or is it the memory that hurts

Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 1, 2006
Poem Edited: Thursday, August 12, 2010

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  • Orran Ainmire (2/13/2008 10:09:00 PM)

    Lovely, with just enough sadness to make me cry. Its seems dry though; i was also confused by the lack of puncuation.

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  • Tatianna Rei Moonshadow (9/27/2006 5:47:00 PM)

    oh don't we all wish the joys of love could be forever... absolutely lovely work dear

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  • Preeti - is here! (9/5/2006 10:04:00 PM)

    I agree with John, add tune to this one, it will sound nice.I like the fact that you've kept the words simple!

    Preets

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  • joey oo (9/3/2006 5:36:00 PM)

    Why indeed Kay - it's so sad that it just doesn't last forever - or is it because... Take care. Joey

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  • Scarlet Red (8/3/2006 8:28:00 AM)

    puno ng emosyon.. maganda ang pagkakabuo.. i can feel the emotion of the poem.. just hope both of you can resolve it soon.. best wishes my dear.. =)

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  • Gabe Cruise (7/3/2006 9:48:00 AM)

    so powerful words yet so simple, it flows thru the veins, you'll feel the chill inside. i felt guilty in me, im so sorry.

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  • John Tiong ChunghooJohn Tiong Chunghoo (7/2/2006 12:13:00 AM)

    sing like a song. good kay.

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