Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 383,068 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

You Are - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

You are flexible and need no season
Change in minute without any reason
What a versatile woman or person you are?
Leaving me behind and staying very far

You expect response after sweet fight
Prove always when go wrong or right
How to find passage or way with light?
Still I prefer you not to go out of sight

You have lamented number of times
Vehemently opposed for no fault of mines
I may prefer to keep silence and forgo it at once
If you really welcome and change your stance

You were always there at my call
Shielded me with care from possible fall
Why not you change your different attitude?
You may witness sudden fall from altitude

I have nothing to offer but an advice
Simple solution but not as mechanical device
You may accept or reject it with reservation
It was just a tip or very honest observation

Heavy rainfall may strike with force at stone
Can’t uproot from earth or make it airborne
After all stones are stones without any heart
They may not change even with movement smart

Well one needs to change or positively adopt
Hard core stances put aside for a while and drop
Realistic views without any change or flip flop
Careful Balancing act while driving on slope

You can still remain same without being adamant
I may still appreciate and seek or want
After all it is not game but life at stake
Should remain alert and always awake

Well, life may not be dull but beautiful and nice
As our dish may not be complete without rice
Many cooks may spoil the delicious food
You may still prove and take me out of wood


Comments about You Are by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (12/28/2009 11:17:00 PM)


    ''You were always there at my call
    Shielded me with care from possible fall
    Why not you change your different attitude?
    You may witness sudden fall from altitude''.................owwwwwwwwwww...hehehehehhehehe, can i smile my dear? ...actually, the piece is nice, but am nervous while reading...smileeeeee
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 28, 2009



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