Tuesday, October 20, 2015

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Rating: 3.8

broken and defeated
gasping for breath
body splayed out across the floor
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Christine Sears
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Brian Mayo 20 October 2015

I really liked it. Cool ending- -it made the whole poem perfect.

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 October 2015

Emotional drop. Very nice.

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