Wednesday, April 22, 2015

You Are A Mystery! Comments

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How was it that
a feeling of impotence
gripped my inner being,
the moment I looked at you
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Saratchandra Sahoo
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Umakanta Rout Aroop) 07 June 2015

Don`t ask to reveal the mystery. The beauty lies in its concealment. Once revealed, the fragrance may fade away. But Flower (element) fades but fragrance never fades! It expands and expands.....from contraction to expansion; from darkness to light. Only to feel and realise. Can it be lightened to you to make you know as inquired by you in the last but one stanza? That`s the beauty of this poem that I enjoyed a lot. Little, but powerful.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 April 2015

Very nicely and aptly presented. Excellent collocation. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 22 April 2015

Wonderful writing, Saratchandra. Thanks

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