You Are Inside Me, Poem by Liza Sud

You Are Inside Me,

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You are inside me,
I am – inside you.
It’s not in bodies –
Words are so mindful.

Is it exiting?
More! Not a sin!
We are exiling
Autumnal spleen.

Our poems
also may kiss.
They are the souls’ parts
close to a bliss.

Hearing and talking
Closely entwining,
Happy and tender
Both sides’ liking.

It may be broken
Only by God,
If it turns low –
Then He will come!

Wednesday, November 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mannah Shekh 15 November 2015

I just falling for the poem... It's ondorfull dear poet!

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Daniel Brick 14 November 2015

OUR POEMS MAY KISS etc. that is so tender and sweet. The balloon poem you wrote and my balloon poem written in response to it are surely poems that kiss. And now that I; m thinking about our poems, the Bayreuth and A. Blok as well!

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M Asim Nehal 11 November 2015

Superb poem with silken touch, , , Loved it Liza.

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