Sunday, February 8, 2009

You Are Lighting The Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

you are lowered above me
when in the light blue bed
I am covering myself with your body
like with soft silk matter
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Maria Barbara Korynt
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Patti Masterman 24 August 2009

Oh my- almost, I got burned there. What a scorching poem, and what a spiritual ending. We humans can never be wholly physical or wholly spiritual- we are a constantly evolving blend of the two, which is well represented here..very memorable poem.

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Dagmara Anna 19 February 2009

Love poem (EROTYK) . Beautiful, it is worthwhile reading :)

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