Remember that night we three walked a long way back home?
My hand in yours, yours in his
I chattered to your left like a cicada to summer heat
You clutched my fingers with eyes dig into my sorrow deep
He watched us by silence and gentle summer breeze
You turned to him, him to you
You smiled in beauty, and said 'we're so lucky'
He stood and searching, 'why? My sweety'
I walked and waiting, 'because i have you, you have me'
I hugged you in deep, you sweetest thief
His grey hairs did weep
My heart lost in dream
Your smiles hanged still on the soft beam
His love, my friendship, you stole back home
Your poem is deftly written, and it has to be carefully presented because the situation is complicated. I like the way you show very small gestures that convey hidden meanings and reveal tender feelings. You know your ideal reader will be alert to these signals so you can imply things rather than state them directly. That's a quality of true poetry
Thank you sir, 'imply things rather than state them directly', I'll always keep this in mind. :) Best wishes
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You have a wonderful way with words. A very passionate piece elegantly brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing Anne.