I Want Poem by Anne Yun

I am speechless I don't know what to say but i am going to do my best to, truly magnificent art my friend you want recollections, reflections, evaluations, that can purify the past I feel the same way I have done so many wrongs it makes my future hard to deal with but for you to write like this is going to ease up on the things in your past. Please don't ever stop writing.

I want possibilities, uncertainties, varieties, everything that can enrich the future I want recollections, reflections, evaluations, everything that can purify the past, . finally i want you to be yu and i to be myself. yes. we are all unique beings in our own way. these verses at the end are fine verses. thank you dear poetess.. tony

Very nicely done. The symmetry, the antithetical contrasts, the rhythm. very enjoyable. :)

Thought's flow round and round inside your mind. Could he but see the kind of girl I am. Then I would fly so high the sky would touch my wing's. Then I would close his eyes to what I've seen.. iip

The most sublime poem I have seen on PoemHunter. What a display of talent! Top score, dear poet

This is truly a Poem of Hope. You throw out a wide net and pull in many examples of what you hope for, any one of which will enrich your life. The language is direct and unshadowed by doubt or failure. You are simply equal to the task of achieving the poem and laying a foundation for further

Good writing. Keep it up.

live and let live. This is a simple but very truthful poem.

Yes, by knowing the full range of feelings, you become yourself. This passion for life reminds me LUST FOR LIFE, a biographical novel about Vincent Van Gogh. // In an uncanny way, your poem echoes one that I recently translated: THE WEIGHT OF A SPONGE. I invite you to read it.