Saturday, July 4, 2015

You Aren'T You Comments

Rating: 4.8

You aren't you
I'll tell you how come
Your thinking has been done for you
By the colors you are from
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Hunter Hawley
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Dr Antony Theodore 02 August 2016

Determination and power .......... there is lot of conviction in your poem. there is a powerful message..... dear poet. thank you. tony

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Allotey Abossey 06 July 2015

You've written well my friend. God bless you

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Chinedu Dike 05 July 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Much ado about nothing well depicted in the piece. I like the rhyme scheme of the poem. A good one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Jamilla Smith 05 July 2015

Loved it. Amazing words amazing message.

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Kelly Kurt 04 July 2015

Too many people spew rhetoric, believing what they've been told to believe without thinking. Borders, flags, patriotism and unwarranted pride will always lead to no good. Thanks for sharing, Hunter Peace

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