The pain is too much,
This crack you have caused,
Created a chasm,
From which flies pain,
Rushing to engulf me,
Consume me,
Finish me,
You have caused this,
You are to blame,
Shattered my heart like ice,
Turned it cold,
And now I hate you,
I wil forever make your life hell,
Forever cause you pain,
Make you suffer as u have done to me,
Again and again,
You turned me,
Made me this uncaring monster,
With a heart of stone,
You.
Broke my heart...
woahhhhh! such a cold and icy and dark poem! but its amazing-ly well written and really thoughtful (:
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ouch. Heartbreak affects people so differently. I like how honestly you captured the desire to hurt the person just as bad if not worse for how they've made you suffer. Relatable and raw.