You think your immune,
To the powers that be,
Those who say,
That you're meant for me,
You try to hide,
That you are mine,
Until you die,
You don't understand,
The bond we share,
How for ever more,
I will strip you bare,
Kudos for this poem. Just what I wanted for my stalker-based book :) Amazing job! Thank you.
Perfect! Exactly what me and my friend were looking for in our story.
Full of hunger for power and lingering creepyness (? not sure that is a word) Well done. Last two lines are especially fitting.
dude, Un-Known? totally stole my comment idea. but itz still a beast poem!
Lol, that really does sound like a stalker / potential rapist. Quite a nice poem if you're watching from those eyes, I always struggle with writing about people, but that's tops.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Wow, very unpredictable O.o Good!