You Have To Promise Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
You Have To Promise
You have preferred to be lonely
In isolation readily and happily
You cared little for attachment
It was only time for resentment
When loneliness starts?
It’s magic is spread in parts
It creates dominant position
To keep one always in confusion
No one may expect humiliation
It is impediment to good relation
“Give and take” must be the slogan
As we all are sensible human
It is better not to utter
And in air simply whisper
That you loved
Which I did not believe
Just remember me honestly
I shall pick the signal and feel aptly
Simple words may do no wonder
You have to promise and really surrender
nice lines... Frank MaximusLess than a minute ago sometimes we just need to be alone.. Comment 0 good
You have preferred to be lonely In isolation readily and happily
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just wonderful! Chika OzeLess than a minute ago great work from an elder. lol! all the stanzas would do well on their own, which i like so much. however, mehta should be careful not be carried away by the sweet usage of idle words. always allow your stanzas to flow freely from one to the other. that is the bare essence of being poetic. -chika Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago thanks dear. i have developed technique where by each stanza stands separate and independant and at the same time maintain continuity.. enjoy poetry dear i am thankful for keen reading