You I Poem by Gcg Anonymous

You I

Rating: 5.0


When I hear your laughter, when I see your face
My heart goes faster, speeding in a race
It’s the small things you do, the hello and hi
Which makes my mind stop and lets time quickly go by

The feelings I have for you are too hard to explain
They make me so crazy, that I’m almost sane
To understand it there’s no way, nor place to go
But look into my eyes and then maybe, perhaps you will almost know

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 21 October 2011

Impressive! You really got through with this amazing, simple but well penned and poignant! This write has become your stepping stone that will lead you straight into the Poetry World! Welcome! Your first but not your last, I sincerely hope and that you not be afraid to use your real name next time! 10+++Keep inspiring the World with more such writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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