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A poem crafted so nicely, started so elegantly, had a natural flow, but did not end with the same tempo. Still thanks for the sharing. 10+++

An insightful rendition written with clarity of thought and mind. Well thought out and nicely crafted poem. Thanks for sharing Hannah.

Great poem Hannah, but I suppose you could look at the end notes well(end words) For instance So you took your life, Just as you ha, years ago, inside That part could be looked at properly. Not the semantics though