Monday, December 22, 2014

You Keep The Sea Comments

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You keep anxiously the longing for sweets,
You have torn speech like dirty robes,
And abandon treasure arriving at your feet.
Because the brain is loving stones and pebbles,
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Naveed Akram
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 December 2014

Beyond the place of disturbances, a house lies open To cockles glistening by the sea. Very interesting poem on sea. Wonderful really.

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Lyn Paul 22 December 2014

I enjoyed the Mystery in these words. Thank You

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Naveed Akram

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