Monday, April 13, 2015

'You Love Me Not' Comments

Rating: 4.5

I love you tender now and again.
You love me not, and yet, you’re just as tender.
Why can’t we tear our broken lives apart?
Why can’t we live and give and love and wonder?
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Surge Shatilo
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Kelly Kurt 13 April 2015

A sad tale of unrequited love, told with emotion. Thanks for sharing, Surge. Peace

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Chinedu Dike 13 April 2015

Distress in bliss of love well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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