Anita Trivedi

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You Made Us Realize..... - Poem by Anita Trivedi

All others just told,
But you made us realize.....
All others just made us learn,
But you thaught us how to learn.
All others told these are your
responsibilities,
But you made us realize you
responsibilities.
All others just told,
But you made us realize.....
All others told you have to do it,
But you made us realize why we
have to do it.
All others pointed our mistake,
But you rectified our mistake.
All others told this is life,
But you made us realize what life is?
All others just told,
But you made us realize.....

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Comments about You Made Us Realize..... by Anita Trivedi

  • (7/18/2010 3:07:00 PM)


    Cascade Waterfall Poetry…’push-pull’…educative…and must read poetry…enjoyed and learnt…to map life … congrats for sharing Dear Anita
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
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  • (6/27/2010 5:15:00 AM)


    I wish I find someone..so that I can realize these things..Brilliant flow...superb lines (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2010 3:17:00 PM)


    This goes in line with the fact that you should not give a person a fish, rather teach that person how to fish.....Thanx Anita, you are a very intelligent writer. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/6/2010 6:42:00 AM)


    Very very true dear Anita,
    realization is the key... we go through life without relaizing thousands fo things that come on our way.. good poem and u hve wonderful ideas.. go on writing..
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  • (5/6/2010 6:11:00 AM)


    nice enlightenement to those that have forgotten their true mentor :) a good poem :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 6, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 23, 2010


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