Just A Moment….. Poem by Anita Trivedi

Just A Moment…..

Rating: 5.0


Just a moment let me be with you,
Just wait right now don't leave…..

Let's live every moment of this evening,
Let's this sea, this wind & this nature
for us sing.
Let's hold hand &feel the feeling of
togetherness,
Yes I know however we go far our love
will be no less.
Just let me drink those tears flowing
towards your cheek,
Yes I can hear your silence's peak.

Let this evening grow to night,
And this star's shine & let a moon
light.
Tomorrow you have to go for war,
So let's once again like kids count
that beautiful stars.
What else life has store for us don't
know,
So in these moments let our hearts flow.

Just a moment let me be with you,
Just wait right now don't leave…..
Let's walk together for a while,
And just give your sweet smile.
I will capture your smile in my
heart forever,
Fragrance of our relation will die never.
You are solider & have to go,
You have tied knot to take care of
motherland I know.

Is this war must,
Coz these wars can only our life rust.
And also remember I will be waiting for
you in my life,
You have promised me to tie knot with me
& make me wife.
Your bride will be waiting for you; always
looking at that door,
You are in me; in my every core.

Just a moment let me be with you,
Just wait right now don't leave…..

{Wars can only rust our life. Please don't let war be victor.
Just at least once hear to our heart.}


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aastha Uppal 29 July 2010

beautifully explains the commitment of a soldier, the relationship with his loved ones, what they must be going through during the difficult times of war.. how selflessly the soldier serves the country and with the same selflessness how the loved ones are ready to hold on during the war times and wait everafter for him to come back, , , nice theme.. well written

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R.k Das 29 July 2010

beautiful poem, celebrating, , love, , happiness, togetherness, compassion, , keep it up... :) :)

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Pranab K Chakraborty 29 July 2010

Humanity is the last word, not brutality.......ultimate approach........a different style as a responsible and sensitive human being. Two different dimensions reflects through this writing.....1] Universal lover's heart can not bear the parting, wants the living touch of beloved to keep eternally with self......2] Framed work of social commitment. Soldiers life have been adopted to propagate human approach against war. Appreciating. Well done. Write more....... Regards, 10+ pranab

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 July 2010

Solider ties knots twice [lol]…one with Mother land and the other with beloved…indeed soldiers beloveds concern for comeback in romantic tune here nicely orchestrated…flowething emotion…spilling…dousing whole being…fine moments with this poetry I enjoyed…thanks for sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Dom N. Kafley 30 July 2010

Anita, I just read your new entry 'Just a moment'. You have penned this in a romantic tune. Loved it. Thank you so much for letting this opportunity to read you. keep flowing. Subhakamana.-Dom

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 April 2016

Just a moment let me be with you, Just wait right now don't leave….. Let's live every moment of this evening, Let's this sea, this wind & this nature for us sing. Let's hold hand &feel the feeling of togetherness, Yes I know however we go far our love will be no less. Just let me drink those tears flowing towards your cheek, Yes I can hear your silence's peak. Let this evening grow to night, And this star's shine & let a moon light. Tomorrow you have to go for war, So let's once again like kids count that beautiful stars. What else life has store for us don't know, So in these moments let our hearts flow. Just a moment let me be with you, Just wait right now don't leave….. Let's walk together for a while, And just give your sweet smile. I will capture your smile in my heart forever, Fragrance of our relation will die never. Wow..what a great poet in you Anita! It's a better war poem than any of the ones I have read amongst the Soviet war poems. At least far far better than 3000 of them. You portray yourself as a great wife and a trustworthy beloved bride. Thanks for the poem.10 for if. Subhas

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 August 2015

I'll land to the world of stars & angels, And then in this world there will be no strangers. I'll land to the world of rain showers, And then I'll make everyone feel god's love every hour. dear anita poetess, so long i did not log into poemhunter. just today i began to write again and to read. thank you for this wonderful poem God bless you always. tony

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Bursting with beauty and full of feelings. Well written my friend! 10/10

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Angeljj Hobbs 04 August 2010

A beautiful poem Anita: -) A moment.. that such as this when taken into your heart..will carry you both through the days and nights apart.. I wish many more for you and your future husband, and his safe return into your arms. Blessings Angeljj: -)

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Dwi Utami 04 August 2010

oww everyone should have a moment but your moment so great.. Moment togetherness Moment of evening. Moment we have love* oww very touch..+10.congrats

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