Anita Trivedi

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What If.....? ? ? - Poem by Anita Trivedi

What if god asks us to make a wish.....?
Then why don't we make a wish to
forget what is foe,
And why don’t we just let it go.
What we get when we make war,
Coz a door to friend is not so far.

What if god asks us to make a wish.....?
Then why don't we make a wish to
forget what is failure,
And why are we always in tear.
Let’s tell failure simple nope,
Coz there is always a hope.

What if god asks us to make a wish.....?
Then why don't we make a wish to
forget what is differentiation,
And why are we in such misconception.
Dreaming the whole world one I can dare,
Coz making it apart is not so fair.

What if god asks us to make a wish.....?

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Comments about What If.....? ? ? by Anita Trivedi

  • (7/18/2010 3:13:00 PM)


    ‘Lets tell failure simple nope,
    Coz there is always a hope.’ ~ Ma’am excellent poetry will pump in calorie of self confidence in 'dense'…great write for youngs especially …enjoyed much Poet Anita…thanks sharing..
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
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  • Nooruddeen Mm (5/24/2010 1:28:00 AM)


    A poem with so many questions
    A verity one
    Good work
    Rgds
    Noor
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/13/2010 6:19:00 AM)


    What if god ask us to make a wish.....?


    v nice one to prob mind.one ponders over issues but gets no where, ......nicelyput all....10

    read mine..i miss...national sentiments
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  • (5/12/2010 3:12:00 PM)


    I always like reading questioning poems.......They are not forcing any ideas, rather they give a chance 4 2nd thought......well done (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2010 3:48:00 AM)


    'Than why don't we make a wish to forget what is differentation,
    And why are we in such misconception.'

    Good questions here - a good poem to get one thinking :)
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  • (5/10/2010 6:18:00 AM)


    Love the optimism in your poem. Good job, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/10/2010 5:55:00 AM)


    What if God ask us tomake a wish.
    nice Anita
    you begin with forgetting the evil done by the enemies. nice start..
    forget falure and be positive in life.
    dreaming of the world as one.. nice ideas.. thank u for sharing. God bless you.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 10, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 23, 2010


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