Uncouth ill educated lout.
You make your mind up instantly,
you are quite sure you have no doubt.
He is what he appears to be
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Ivor, the poem has a grand structure and rythmn - a classical rhyming pattern and carries its subject flawlessly (less a couple typos) end-to-end. I might be wrong but I prefer to read this type of verse to the unstructured, enigmatic meanderings of the 'other' genre. Rgds, Ivan
Breeding apart, what is the differance between a lord or a earl are they they not the same has a working man or girl, only differance they have money to look the part, covering all sorts of evil that lies in there hearts...10
This is an amazing poem.. truly wonderful and i enjoyed it so much. Well done, your writing leaves the heart stopped for a second as it takes in the words.. Thank you for this great poem Take care, Mel xx
Excellently and efficiently expressed.