Thursday, October 11, 2007

You Might Be Wrong Comments

Rating: 5.0

Uncouth ill educated lout.
You make your mind up instantly,
you are quite sure you have no doubt.
He is what he appears to be
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Excellently and efficiently expressed.

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Ivan Donn Carswell 11 October 2007

Ivor, the poem has a grand structure and rythmn - a classical rhyming pattern and carries its subject flawlessly (less a couple typos) end-to-end. I might be wrong but I prefer to read this type of verse to the unstructured, enigmatic meanderings of the 'other' genre. Rgds, Ivan

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David Taylor 11 October 2007

All my best books by definition have well worn covers...

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 October 2007

Breeding apart, what is the differance between a lord or a earl are they they not the same has a working man or girl, only differance they have money to look the part, covering all sorts of evil that lies in there hearts...10

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Melissa Coventry 11 October 2007

This is an amazing poem.. truly wonderful and i enjoyed it so much. Well done, your writing leaves the heart stopped for a second as it takes in the words.. Thank you for this great poem Take care, Mel xx

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ivor or ivor.e hogg

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Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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