You're absolutely right.
Bit by bit, we came to an end
as a life that goes into its dark,
as the bitter words that we spend.
Only sincere feelings leave us a mark:
Eternal love as clear light.
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Potpuno si u pravu.
Potpuno si u pravu.
Malo po malo, došli smo do kraja
kao život koji ide u svoj mrak.
Gorke riječi nikad ne donose slavu.
Samo iskrena osjećanja ostavljaju nam znak:
Vječnu ljubav kao jasni zrak.
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I would like to translate this poem
Wow! A brilliant short work on love... highly expressive and beautifully romantic....10