You'Re Like... Poem by Hannah York

You'Re Like...

Rating: 4.5


You're like a helium balloon,
Floating away out of reach,
Always gone a kiss too soon.

You're like a floating boat,
Coasting along without me,
You make my breath catch in my throat.

You're like a flowing river,
Bouncing me along like a helpless pebble,
Every time you smile I shiver.

You're like a frozen snowflake,
Flying close but never staying long,
Always leaving my heart to break.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 17 August 2013

You have described your 'You so nicely in this poem. Four three line stanzas have portrayed your feelings honestly. A nice poem, good language.

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