Just Becca

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You'Re Losing Yourself - Poem by Just Becca

i think you're losing yourself
each piece breaking off
snap
i wish you would tell me
but you're not telling anyone
silence
i'm sorry for leaning on you
so hard you can't stand up
falling
i'm sorry for bothering you
when all you want to do is be by yourself
alone
i realize you're busy
with everything you have to do
no time
but i'm just trying to keep the deal
i hope you do to


Comments about You'Re Losing Yourself by Just Becca

  • (2/16/2008 6:35:00 PM)

    I like this.... people can so make themselve distance.... like a weapon in an unequal relationship.... Fine, walk away..... but the power is keeping them hanging on!
    well done!
    Rogerx
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  • (2/16/2008 6:12:00 PM)

    different; but i like it. original : ] (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 16, 2008



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