Free Faller

Rookie (May 23,1993 / Washington State)

You'Re Not There, But I See You - Poem by Free Faller

You're not here
But I see you
You're not talking
But I hear you
You're not touching me
But I feel you
I see your deep eyes
I hear your to-die-for voice
I wipe your weeping cries
But my hands are not even moist
I could watch your moves for hours
When you're not even in front of me
Your compassion makes me a coward
It's you that works so powerfully
You're not there
But I see you
You're not talking
But I hear you
You're not touching me
But I feel you


Comments about You'Re Not There, But I See You by Free Faller

  • (5/13/2006 10:04:00 PM)


    This is a very beautiful poem. It truly reflects on love, and drawing comfort from love. Well done. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/27/2006 1:08:00 PM)


    very romantic you're a little young to be serious about any boy. Be careful my friend. But a beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • (4/25/2006 5:35:00 PM)


    What we can see with the eyes of the soul is powerful and evocative. A very fine write.
    thank you for sharing.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 25, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, January 26, 2009


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