Free Faller

Rookie (May 23,1993 / Washington State)

Paradise - Poem by Free Faller

Far away places
A typical neverland
Paradise spaces
The ocean and warm sand
Never seen faces
Not placed on a map
Violence is shaded
Just give God your hand

Comments about Paradise by Free Faller

  • (4/30/2006 3:30:00 PM)

    Most excellent poem my friend. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/27/2006 4:57:00 PM)

    It's great to see you writing again. (Report) Reply

  • (4/27/2006 4:46:00 PM)

    Short, strong, beautiful, hopeful!
    A very very good piece of work! ! !

    ~~Elya Thorn~~
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  • (4/27/2006 3:55:00 PM)

    What a charming and reassuring write. I love the last line.

    Warm regards,

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 27, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, January 26, 2009

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