You Saw Me Right Through Poem by Old Teenage Poems

You Saw Me Right Through



I never thought something so simple
would turn out so wrong
Always figured it would work itself out
that someone better would come along

And if they'd told me a year ago
that It'd be you I'd be singing about
I'd laugh so hard, I would never have believed
that you could make me cry my heart out

I try to picture myself wth other people
but the image returns to you
Keep trying to figure you out
But you, but you
You saw me right through
You saw me right through

And it should never have been us two
But you saw me right through

It might be the scariest thing on earth
someone looking, and seeing your all
All your failures and compromises
you just can't help but fall

Fall into that ocean
that was the puddle of your past
All the emotions put aside
all the broken that was meant to last

And I wanted to look you in the eye
and tell you everything that was true
But your very look shattered me
Because you, because you
You saw me right through
You saw me right through

And it should never have been us two
But you saw me right through
Yes, you saw me
you saw me
you saw me

And chose not to

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ro'ya Abdulaal 17 September 2009

Well written, the idea is sooooooooo sweet and you expressed it in words very well. Great job

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