Wars, deaths and destruction
Suffering everywhere I look
And no matter how much we gave
it was never as much as they took
Men in power
abusing, opressing
everything sorrounding them
each ruler more depressing
And although we speak of change
repetance is all I can see
Mankind was supposed to evolve
But is this all we can be?
I second the feeling for that.Good straightforward poem.Your strength is that you are very direct to the point with no excessive words.I gave you a ten
usually when writing something like this using rhymes takes away from the sincerity of it, but that definitely didn't happen here, I love this!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A question I ask all the time - an excellent, thoughtful poem.