Old Teenage Poems


A Democratic Society? - Poem by Old Teenage Poems

Someone once told me
'It's a human right to speak your mind'
But if you pay a fee
It's easier, you'll find

And I have heard that democracy
is the way in wich we rule our land
Yet somehow hypocracy
is a word closer to hand

When you speak of freedom
in this world did you think through?
Did you realize that to some
that would not seem quite true

Did it ever cross your mind,
go through those gray cells of yours,
that the world you live in
Can't be a private force?


Comments about A Democratic Society? by Old Teenage Poems

  • Mel Vincent Basconcillo (5/7/2009 2:23:00 AM)

    thought provoking and intuitive..u have done a da vinci code on this..perfectly! u amazing! outstanding poem (Report)Reply

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  • Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple (1/28/2008 3:29:00 PM)

    Democracy is a state of mind, but it must be the state of mind of not only the citizens, but the rulers. Often, those who rule forget this fact. Nice, thought provoking poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Gregory Collins (12/30/2007 11:18:00 AM)

    democrazy(c) has a certain vulnerbility to it, very exploitable, i believe your poem captures what is a serious topic globally as well , all these signs to think about (Report)Reply

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  • Aldo Kraas (11/26/2007 2:14:00 PM)

    I believe you have to learn to speak your mind
    And not be afarid to do so
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  • Ivan Donn Carswell (11/26/2007 1:32:00 PM)

    Agnes, you are right - democracy is a state of mind, not a state of being. It only exists if you believe it does... Rgds, Ivan (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 26, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 26, 2011


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