You Walk On Comments

Wow. So much heartbreak and passion filled emotion! Leah used the correct term when she said a haunting poem. Can feel your frustration and desperation to be seen and heard. Well done!

'You wanted all of me, And I tried so hard to give myself To you, all for you, only for you.' - These are beautiful lines, but the the end is so sad! ' I'm screaming Out your name, but you fade Into the darkness now, leaving me Alone in this moon-lit street.' - Touched me!

Can't you hear me? I'm screaming Out your name, but you fade Into the darkness now, leaving me Alone in this moon-lit street So haunting & beautiful... one of my favourite poems of yours.