Daleen McElmurry


You Were Suppouse To Be My Mother - Poem by Daleen McElmurry

You were suppose to be my mother but you left me all alone
i know that you lost my brother when he was only one month old
you got caught up in the moment and your selfish ways
you delt with the pain with out feeling any shame you stopped eating and just wasted away yeah mabey you were hurting but what about me i was only eleven why couldnt you see that i needed you even though you didnt need me i was left to be momma to my brother and sis what a life you left me with werent you so lucky to take the easy way out now i have my babies and i learned it all on my own
because you were suppose to be my mother but left me all alone
rip. mom i will always have love for you


Comments about You Were Suppouse To Be My Mother by Daleen McElmurry

  • (4/5/2008 11:21:00 PM)


    im sorry about your mom daleen..im sure she loved you very much..there are 2 hardest things in the world..1 losing a child and the other to lose your mom at a young age..i feel for you..hugs (Report) Reply

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  • (4/4/2008 11:05:00 PM)


    how pretty even though she passed im sure she loved you very much I to fill the pain and sorrow but sometimes people cant be as strong as we are and just deside to give up on the most important thing in ther life and thats/ our children/
    we are different then her we cant just give up we have too many people who care.
    I got kinda tierie eyed I love you big sis love sandy
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 4, 2008



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