Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Your Absence Is Deeply Hurting The Child Comments

Rating: 4.5

Your absence is deeply hurting the child
Because she has no one to turn to
She is dazed and confused
She doesn't know what to do
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Ronell Warren Alman
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Roseann Shawiak 18 September 2015

Deeply poignant and meaningful message you have presented in this touching and delicate poem. It has a softened staccato rhythm lying beneath it, as if to drum your message into the mind! Very well written with great meaning, Ronell. Totally love it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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